Post by Saeren on Jul 24, 2006 17:29:15 GMT
With a step back, and then forward Saeren, Lebennen, Maedion and Legolas somersaulted, twisting their bodies into a spin, coming down in the midst of another line of Immortals, even as they came up, they began to spin again, forming a whirling screw-edge of blades, impossible to penetrate, like wheat before a scythe, men fell back, limbless, headless, dreadfully wounded, Saeren stopped the spin in one unhuman move , his smile white in a ghastly face of red blood and black war-paint and plunged forward.
It was suicidal , but behind him and Maglors axe, the Bloodguard formed a wedge, and they sheared into the Cheyans.
They were unstoppable, warriors threw themselves at them from every side but the axe flashed like quicksilver, the others scimitars swords forming a glittering counterpoint, like separate part of the same deadly dance, and the remaining Bloodguard, trained by him, refusing to accept defeat, exploded into controlled and violent action.
A young soldier , only accepted into the Immortals a month ago, suddenly saw Saeren bearing down on him, like some demonic tempest, turned, and saw Maglor but paces away and fear rose like bile in his throat.
Dropping his sword, he turned, pushing the man behind him.
'' back! '' he shouted, '' get back, ''
The men made way for him and the cry was taken up by others, thinking it was an order from the officers.
'' back, back to the stream! '' the cry swept through the ranks and the Immortals turned, streaming back toward the Cheyan camp.
Horrified, Leonidas screamed orders as his men milled across, wading the stream, disorganized and bewildered.
He felt a presence behind him, strong even through the rage, and turned, his sword up, and out, felt it caught in a grip impossibly strong, and looked up into blazing blue eyes.
'' Where is your legend now you eastern sons of bitches? '' Tar asked him, suavely.
........A little later, he strode over to the others.
'' They will return, '' he murmured, '' they have to, or the king will know he is beaten and finished, '' he impatiently scrubbed rapidly clotted blood from a cut above his left eye, his body was cut also, mottled with bruises, but his cobalt eyes shone, unwearied, as he accepted hot wine, then, with courtesy, he lead Leonidas to his command tent. They had perhaps an hour, he judged, until the next attack.
His eyes swept over them. Perhaps one hundred and fifty remained out of the three hundred . Whatever came to pass, it was a legend in the making. He had not seen fighting like this since the Elder Days, so hopeless, and yet so brilliant.
Saeren handed Leonidas a goblet of wine, and the young general, close to him now, felt the impact of his charisma . He could not truly believe what he was seeing, he had watched this man ( man? ) and those with him fight for eight untiring days with a lethal panache which had roused a disbelieving and reluctant admiration in the Immortals. So few, yet as if the Gods had made them simply to be warriors.
'' If you would like to watch? ' Saeren said, ' we will see an ending to this. ''
Leonidas , disarmed and bound, was lead from the tent to a vantage point. He watched Saeren walk away with a long, light stride What the hell are they? He had believed the rumour that this one was the son of Sauron to be mere propaganda.
Saeren spoke to Lebennen, then Legolas, Maedion, and Maglor, and gathering half the Bloodguard to him, he turned and jogged silently away.
The drums sounded again and the Immortals massed, fury was in their eyes now and they glared balefully at the defenders, a pitiful few they would not be turned back, not by these. their captured general would soon be free, and he would see how his men fought and killed.
From the first clash, the Bloodguard began to give ground, as they were commanded, they could in any case, find space only by giving ground, their swords rising and falling with pitiless efficiency.
Udamah the King, tasting victory,, rode forward in his chariot, as suddenly the Bloodguard broke.
the battle was won...but the Immortals were desperate to erase the memory of defeat,they blocked the pathway to the west determined to kill the last of the defenders.
'' Push on! '' Screamed Leonidas, '' you are blocking the pass! '' he groaned, writhing in his bonds. He could not believe his eyes, the Immortals were unknowingly continuing the work of the defenders, the narrow pass now gorged with warriors as the rest of the army jostled behind them.
Leonidas saw a tall man - Tars Lieutenant, cut himself suddenly free of those surrounding him, joined by a golden haired elf, bleeding from scores of wounds, they threw themselves at the sheer rock walls of the pass, and went up it like a mountain goats... others of the apparently desperately battling Bloodguard followed, these were men, not elves, and ropes were thrown down to facilitate their ascent.
And then , silhouetted against the skyline, Leonidas saw Saeren stride easily to a promontory, joined by his Lieutenant, by the gold haired one, and those others who had fought beside him, shoulder to shoulder from the beginning, tall, and terrible, with luminous , piercing eyes.
He raised a great longbow, and signaled.
Arrows began to fall like hail, unable to use their shields the Cheyans went down like flies, as the arrow storm continued from above, the arrows coming more quickly than Leonidas could ever have imagined possible. Then he thought he saw Saeren smile as he sighted, and as he watched, the shaft took Udamah, trapped by suddenly fleeing , scrambling panicked soldiers, through the eye. the King fell and the cry went up, as the rout began in earnest.
Unable to move, seeing the destruction of his Immortals, and his fathers death, Leonidas bent his head and wept.
The sun westered. A scatter of pebbles sounded as Saeren jumped down. With a flick of a dagger he loosed the bonds that held Leonidas.
' Looks like you are King, ' he said brightly, ' Let us feast. '
It was suicidal , but behind him and Maglors axe, the Bloodguard formed a wedge, and they sheared into the Cheyans.
They were unstoppable, warriors threw themselves at them from every side but the axe flashed like quicksilver, the others scimitars swords forming a glittering counterpoint, like separate part of the same deadly dance, and the remaining Bloodguard, trained by him, refusing to accept defeat, exploded into controlled and violent action.
A young soldier , only accepted into the Immortals a month ago, suddenly saw Saeren bearing down on him, like some demonic tempest, turned, and saw Maglor but paces away and fear rose like bile in his throat.
Dropping his sword, he turned, pushing the man behind him.
'' back! '' he shouted, '' get back, ''
The men made way for him and the cry was taken up by others, thinking it was an order from the officers.
'' back, back to the stream! '' the cry swept through the ranks and the Immortals turned, streaming back toward the Cheyan camp.
Horrified, Leonidas screamed orders as his men milled across, wading the stream, disorganized and bewildered.
He felt a presence behind him, strong even through the rage, and turned, his sword up, and out, felt it caught in a grip impossibly strong, and looked up into blazing blue eyes.
'' Where is your legend now you eastern sons of bitches? '' Tar asked him, suavely.
........A little later, he strode over to the others.
'' They will return, '' he murmured, '' they have to, or the king will know he is beaten and finished, '' he impatiently scrubbed rapidly clotted blood from a cut above his left eye, his body was cut also, mottled with bruises, but his cobalt eyes shone, unwearied, as he accepted hot wine, then, with courtesy, he lead Leonidas to his command tent. They had perhaps an hour, he judged, until the next attack.
His eyes swept over them. Perhaps one hundred and fifty remained out of the three hundred . Whatever came to pass, it was a legend in the making. He had not seen fighting like this since the Elder Days, so hopeless, and yet so brilliant.
Saeren handed Leonidas a goblet of wine, and the young general, close to him now, felt the impact of his charisma . He could not truly believe what he was seeing, he had watched this man ( man? ) and those with him fight for eight untiring days with a lethal panache which had roused a disbelieving and reluctant admiration in the Immortals. So few, yet as if the Gods had made them simply to be warriors.
'' If you would like to watch? ' Saeren said, ' we will see an ending to this. ''
Leonidas , disarmed and bound, was lead from the tent to a vantage point. He watched Saeren walk away with a long, light stride What the hell are they? He had believed the rumour that this one was the son of Sauron to be mere propaganda.
Saeren spoke to Lebennen, then Legolas, Maedion, and Maglor, and gathering half the Bloodguard to him, he turned and jogged silently away.
The drums sounded again and the Immortals massed, fury was in their eyes now and they glared balefully at the defenders, a pitiful few they would not be turned back, not by these. their captured general would soon be free, and he would see how his men fought and killed.
From the first clash, the Bloodguard began to give ground, as they were commanded, they could in any case, find space only by giving ground, their swords rising and falling with pitiless efficiency.
Udamah the King, tasting victory,, rode forward in his chariot, as suddenly the Bloodguard broke.
the battle was won...but the Immortals were desperate to erase the memory of defeat,they blocked the pathway to the west determined to kill the last of the defenders.
'' Push on! '' Screamed Leonidas, '' you are blocking the pass! '' he groaned, writhing in his bonds. He could not believe his eyes, the Immortals were unknowingly continuing the work of the defenders, the narrow pass now gorged with warriors as the rest of the army jostled behind them.
Leonidas saw a tall man - Tars Lieutenant, cut himself suddenly free of those surrounding him, joined by a golden haired elf, bleeding from scores of wounds, they threw themselves at the sheer rock walls of the pass, and went up it like a mountain goats... others of the apparently desperately battling Bloodguard followed, these were men, not elves, and ropes were thrown down to facilitate their ascent.
And then , silhouetted against the skyline, Leonidas saw Saeren stride easily to a promontory, joined by his Lieutenant, by the gold haired one, and those others who had fought beside him, shoulder to shoulder from the beginning, tall, and terrible, with luminous , piercing eyes.
He raised a great longbow, and signaled.
Arrows began to fall like hail, unable to use their shields the Cheyans went down like flies, as the arrow storm continued from above, the arrows coming more quickly than Leonidas could ever have imagined possible. Then he thought he saw Saeren smile as he sighted, and as he watched, the shaft took Udamah, trapped by suddenly fleeing , scrambling panicked soldiers, through the eye. the King fell and the cry went up, as the rout began in earnest.
Unable to move, seeing the destruction of his Immortals, and his fathers death, Leonidas bent his head and wept.
The sun westered. A scatter of pebbles sounded as Saeren jumped down. With a flick of a dagger he loosed the bonds that held Leonidas.
' Looks like you are King, ' he said brightly, ' Let us feast. '